A moment from the manuscript
The shortcut ended at a fallen branch.
Nell looked left. She looked right.
The long way was full of possibilities.
A read-aloud picture-book idea about curiosity and taking a different path.
Follow Nell’s Small Detour, an original planning example, from a few lines of manuscript to a character reference and prototype spread. These are illustrative materials, not an exported Occibo book or final commercial artwork.
The shortcut ended at a fallen branch.
Nell looked left. She looked right.
The long way was full of possibilities.
A read-aloud picture-book idea about curiosity and taking a different path.
A children’s book character reference sheet records what should stay recognizable across scenes. Pose and expression can change without redesigning the character.
Try the relationship between text, image, and reading order before commissioning or making final artwork.
The shortcut ended
at a fallen branch.
Nell looked left.
She looked right.
The long way was full
of possibilities.
What matters: Nell should feel curious. Preserve the recognizable shell and body, show just one Nell in this scene, and make the route around the branch easy to read.
What is open: The illustrator can reinterpret the brushwork, garden details, viewpoint, and composition. The reference explains the story intention; it is not a request to trace the prototype.
Check at the next review: Does the branch stay in the same place across adjoining spreads? Is Nell following the route we introduced? Does the next page deliver the discovery promised here?